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  1. Alyssa
    Alyssa Published |

    Wow, this story is very catching. The way you write…this is only a chapter? Ooo, more is implied then? You have talent my friend, I envy your writing skills.

  2. Justin
    Justin Published |

    Thanks for the comment. This is actually the 3rd chapter. My novel is all over the place. The 4th chapter introduces a new character and his turmoil. But, I hope to be able to bring everything back together in the end. So, reading through the first few chapters may make someone go, “HUH???”


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